12/9 homework
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[Who do you turn to when you have problems?]
Maybe I usually turn to my husband.
I discussed the problem with my friends or family.
My husband became my lover, best friend, and family after getting married.
In most cases, he can\'t solve my problem at work.
But, he can support and give me the power to solve by myself.
And sometimes he helps me to look at situations and solve problems simply.
I think that effective support is the belief someone supports me forever and she/he always beside me.
It makes me strong.
And I think I don\'t have a mentor yet in my work or life.
Most problem is at work me.
I heard that a mentor can be a person alive or a historical person such as Einstein or Leonardo da Vinci.
If my mentor is a person alive like supervisor, it is very easy to ask or discuss the problem.
However, If the mentor is a person who has already died, I need to think about how she/he would solve it.
I hope to find my mentor.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework and for your thoughts as well. I really appreciate the effort! ^^
Most people would turn to their loved ones, husbands/wives, parents, close family members or to friends for advise when it comes to problems with life; but they can\'t relate much when it comes to work. Sometimes when we open up to our husbands about work, they mistook it as a complain so it wouldn\'t help much, right? Well, I hope you do find yourself a mentor! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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I discussed the problem with my friends or family.
I discussed the problem with my friends or family.
>>I also discuss the problem with my friends or family.
My husband became my lover, best friend, and family after getting married.
My husband became my lover, best friend, and family after getting married.
>>CORRECT
In most cases, he can\'t solve my problem at work.
In most cases, he can\'t solve my problem at work.
>>CORRECT
But, he can support and give me the power to solve by myself.
But, he can support and give me the power to solve by myself.
>>CORRECT
And sometimes he helps me to look at situations and solve problems simply.
And sometimes he helps me to look at situations and solve problems simply.
>>CORRECT
I think that effective support is the belief someone supports me forever and she/he always beside me.
>>I think that effective support is the belief that someone will support me forever and she/he always be beside me.
I think that effective support is the belief someone supports me forever and she/he always beside me.
>>I think that effective support is the belief that someone will support me forever and she/he always be beside me.
It makes me strong.
>>CORRECT
And I think I don\'t have a mentor yet in my work or life.
And I think I don\'t have a mentor yet in my work or life.
>>CORRECT
Most problem is at work me.
Most problem is at work me.
>>Most of my problems is at/about work.
I heard that a mentor can be a person alive or a historical person such as Einstein or Leonardo da Vinci.
I heard that a mentor can be a person alive or a historical person such as Einstein or Leonardo da Vinci.
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If my mentor is a person alive like supervisor, it is very easy to ask or discuss the problem.
If my mentor is a person alive like supervisor, it is very easy to ask or discuss the problem.
>>If my mentor is a person alive like a supervisor, it is very easy to ask or discuss the problem.
However, If the mentor is a person who has already died, I need to think about how she/he would solve it.
However, If the mentor is a person who has already died, I need to think about how she/he would solve it.
>>CORRECT
I hope to find my mentor.
I hope to find my mentor.
>>CORRECT
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