12 Apr 2018 / A presentation script

Hi [이름]^^

Here we go with some corrections and suggestions I made for your

compo.

Many thanks! ^^

T. Glenda

This is a script for the presentation.
It is not finished yet, but please check.

A presentation script
Our presentation topic is Adventure trip for foreigners that can do in Korea.

>> Our topic for this presentation is \'Adventure trip foreigners can do in Korea.\'

or

>>> The topic of our presentation is \'Adventure trips foreigners can do in visiting Korea.\'
 We will introduce really special tour.

>> We will introduce a really good special tour package.
 First, It is the DMZ tour in Paju.

>> First, it is the DMZ tour in Paju, South Korea.
 Actually only available in Korea, cause Korea is the only divided country in the world. It will be an unusual tour.

>> It is only available in Korea which is the only divided country in the world. It will be an unusual tour.
 Let me see!!
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The Demilitarized Zone
You can visit it through a travel agent.

>>  Correct

or

>> You can only visit it through a travel agency.

You will have to comply with the control of the Korean army and travel agency. Because It is a place of military tension.

>>You will have to comply with the protocol of the Korean army and the travel agency because it is in a place of military tension.
 But you will have a special experience.

>> But you will certainly have a special/extraordinary experience.
 You can take the train into the Third Tunnel and look around it.

>>  You can take the train in the Third Tunnel and look around it.
 The Dora Observatory gives you a real view of North Korea.

>> Correct 
 In addition, there is an exhibition hall, so you can learn a lot about the Korean War.

>> Correct