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2015-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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If you were given only one day to live what will you do and why? I will spend the whole day with my pets. I won't have any doze even on the sofa. It's waste of time.. I won't touch my iPhone at all. I'd like to shower my pets with kisses on their cute, smelly, soft heads like thousands times, holding tight. It's really sad to imagine that the only 24hours left to spend time with my pets.

강사 첨삭

Gosh you left me teary eyed reading your homework...T.T

I feel you my dear [이름] because just like you, I also have pets. Many pets...

And it is indeed really sad to leave them...T.T

I would really want to talk to you about this someday...

Your pets are really blessed to have you...:)

Thank you so much my dear...

Take care and have a great day...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

If you were given only one day to live what will you do and why?
I will spend the whole day with my pets.

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I won\'t have any doze even on the sofa.

>>correct

It\'s waste of time..

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I won\'t touch my iPhone at all.

>>correct

I\'d like to shower my pets with kisses on their cute, smelly, soft heads like thousands times, holding tight.

>>correct

It\'s really sad to imagine that the only 24hours left to spend time with my pets.

>>correct

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