120. Homework

Thank you very much , Jason^^

I think everything is a double-edged sword.

As long as we use it correctly, I believe it will lead to beneficial results.

Have a great day~

ESSAY: Should people stop using Facebook? Why or why not?
>>CORRECT!
I think Facebook is good for sharing their feeling to the others such as friends, relatives, companions, or someone who is a friend only in Facebook has never seen before.

>>I think Facebook is good for sharing their feeling to the others such as friends, relatives, companions, or someone who is a friend only on Facebook which they have never seen before.

 When a poster feels sad, his friends in Facebook press a sorrow emotion which can see a tears on the yellow face showing their sympathize feeling to him.

>> When a post feels sad, his friends on Facebook press a sorrowful emoticon which can see a tears on the yellow face showing their sympathy to him.

 Or when the poster feels happy, his friends press thumbs up, heart, or great emoticon.

>>CORRECT!

However, it is not helpful for helping them directly.

>>However, it is not helpful to help them directly.

But some people may get a courage or comfort from these actions.

>>CORRECT!

Furthermore, it is useful for getting various information easily since many people post terrible, beneficial, important, and touching issues on the Facebook.

>>Furthermore, it is useful for getting various information easily since many people post terrible, beneficial, important, and touching issues on Facebook.
On the other hand, it gives wrong and faked information too.

>>On the other hand, it gives wrong and fake information too.
 Moreover, it is useful for finding what poster wants to find like whom they lost or something such as a pet, wallet, or cellphone.

>> Moreover, it is useful to find what the post finds like what they lost such as a pet, wallet, or cellphone.

And then, it also uses for spraying variety of adult videos from a lot of difference races.

>>And then, it also uses for spreading a variety of adult videos from a lot of different races.

 Someone takes an advantage since they can see an adult video for free, whereas, a person who was shown their body in the video would get a disadvantage since they don’t want to show their body like that.
>> Someone takes an advantage since they can see an adult video for free, whereas, a person whose body was shown on the video would get a disadvantage since they don’t want to show their body like that.
Anyways, I am using it getting different type of information.

>>Anyways, I am using it to get a different type of information.

So, I can’t say a lot about it.

>>CORRECT!
 In conclusion, in my opinion, if people can handle this problems and benefits well, the Facebook is using a good way.

>> In conclusion, in my opinion, if people can handle these problems and benefits well, then Facebook is used in good way.

If it isn’t, it works for bad way.

>>If it isn’t, it works in a bad way.

 Hence, it depends on them who are using it.

>> Hence, it depends on who is using it.