1204 homework
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework on time. I appreciate it! Thank you for your thoughts here too! I didn\'t quite understand some of your sentences though. ^ ^
To improve oneself, you have to explore a lot of things, experience is the best teacher too, and it\'s always nice to stay out of your comfort zone so you can be better! ^ ^
Yeah.. I wish it\'s a Friday too! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
My answer is obviously yes.
>>Correct
It\'s not a good way to improve myself to stay in present.
>>It\'s not a good way to improve oneself if you would just stay put.
If we didn\'t do anything because we were content with the way we were, we may still be hunter-gatherers.
>>If we didn\'t do anything in the past because we were contented with the way we were, we may still be hunter-gatherers.
For sure, we must take a rest during our travellings to improve ourselves.
>>For sure, it is a must to take a rest after travelling so we can improve ourselves.
I mean doing something is better than doing nothing!
>>Correct
But I think pushing some people to improve their career is not helpful for them.
>>Correct
It may down their morale to do something.
>>It may lessen their esteem and self morale to do something else.
I think we should have time to think about ourselves.
>>Correct
It could decrease time to concern about our future.
>>We may waste time thinking about the future. (I hope this is what you mean)
And through people\'s characteristics, we need to think differently.
>>People have their own characteristics, so we think differently.
Someone may think doing nothing is better.
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But in my case, I think I should do something more and more.
>>Correct
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