121. Homework

I think it depends on a person, Jason^^

One of my friends produces magnificent output when she\'s pressured.

On the contrary, she makes mediocre things when she\'s given a lot of time.

In my case, I think we are the same.

See you^^

ESSAY: Will people be more effective and creative if they are given more free time?
>>CORRECT!
I can’t define the other people’s style since I don’t know how to spend their free time.

>>I can’t define other people’s style since I don’t know how they spend their free time.

But, for me, I would become creative and effective person when I have a free time.

>>But, for me, I would become a creative and effective person when I have a free time.

 Thus, I can’t stand with noisy sound when I need to do concentrate something.

>>Thus, I can’t stand noisy sound when I need to concentrate on something.

It’s because it makes me stressed and mistake.

>>It’s because it makes me stressed and leads me to make mistake.

And I think most artist may work its own room which is isolated by the things that might give them a disruption since they also want to concentrate only their feeling.

>>And I think most artists may work in their own room which is isolated from the things that might give them a disruption since they also want to concentrate only on their feeling.

So, I guess the other people may be more effective and creative when they are more free time same as me.

>> So, I guess other people may be more effective and creative when they have more free time like me.