1210 homework
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What advice would you give to an older person who wants to feel young?
I want to tell them to throw away the idea that the past is right.
Especily, we must abandon our past misbehavior, our familiarity, and our sense of the past. I think that it is important to abandon this three things.
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Good morning [이름]! How was your day? I hope that you enjoy your day. ^^
~~May~~
I want to tell them to throw away the idea that the past is right.
Especily, we must abandon our past misbehavior, our familiarity, and our sense of the past. I think that it is important to abandon this three things.
>> I want to tell them to throw away that idea especially those that they had or heard in the past. I think it is important to forget about these things.
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