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2018-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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What would you do if you were late for an important appointment? I really hate if anyone who will meet witg me is late for our appointment. I\'m rarely late for any appointments. But sometimes I\'m late because of heavy traffic, restroom, etc. If I\'m late, I should express my appology. I think explaining the reason why I\'m late is an excuse especially in case of an important appointment. If it\'s an important business meeting, I would prepare for my presentation quickly. It\'s a big interuption of an appointment so I think I should perfectly prepare for our appointment as soon as possible. And before I get to the appointment place, I will prepare all of it if it\'s possible. Of course, it\'s more important that I wouldn\'t be late. To be honest, I haven\'t been late for an important appointment in my life so if I\'m late, I would be in panic. PS. I couldn\'t understand today is just Tuesday!! I thought it\'s Friday. See you tomorrow^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it!^ ^ 

You gave good thoughts on this one. Being on time for an appointment says a lot about a person. That means you know how to respect time and the people you commit to, it also means that you are respectable as well. But of course, some circumstances are unavoidable, what better way to deal with it than to offer your sincerest apologies and make sure it won\'t happen again! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah



I really hate if anyone who will meet witg me is late for our appointment.

>>I really hate it if someone who sets an appointment to meet me would be late.

I\'m rarely late for any appointments.

>>Correct

But sometimes I\'m late because of heavy traffic, restroom, etc.

>>Correct or

>>But sometimes I\'m late because of heavy traffic, a visit to the restroom, etc. 

If I\'m late, I should express my appology.

>>If I\'m late, I should express my apologies.

I think explaining the reason why I\'m late is an excuse especially in case of an important appointment.

>>Correct

If it\'s an important business meeting, I would prepare for my presentation quickly.

>>If it\'s an important business meeting, I would prepare for my presentation early.

It\'s a big interuption of an appointment so I think I should perfectly prepare for our appointment as soon as possible.

>>It\'s a big interruption for an appointment so I think I should perfectly prepare for it early.

And before I get to the appointment place, I will prepare all of it if it\'s possible.

>>And before I get to the appointment place, I will prepare all of the things I need.

Of course, it\'s more important that I wouldn\'t be late.

>>Of course, it\'s important that I wouldn\'t be late.

To be honest, I haven\'t been late for an important appointment in my life so if I\'m late, I would be in panic.

>>Correct

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