1211 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework on time. I appreciate it! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. Yes, it\'s not a serious thing. ^ ^ I know you are happy to where you are right now. Remember you have your future ahead of you. You are still young. You can explore more and learn while in the process! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
If I could change one thing, I would like to talk to me when I was a freshman don\'t join a cheering club.
>>If I could change one thing, I would like to talk to me when I was a freshman and would tell myself not to join the cheering club.
I didn\'t regret but it took my time away.
>>I don\'t regret it, only it took a lot of my time away.
If I studied instead of dancing, it would be more helpful.
>>If I have studied instead of dancing, it could have been more helpful.
Or I could think about transffering university.
>>Or I could think about transferring to another university.
My university is quite god but my major is not good for job seeking.
>>My university is quite good but my major is not good for employment.
I don\'t have any idea at that time because I was mad at dancing.
>>I didn\'t have any idea at that time because I was mad at dancing.
And my legs didn\'t need to be injured.
>>And my legs wouldn\'t have been injured.
But the biggest reason is for developing myself.
>>Correct
I know I\'m not late now but I feel I need more time.
>>Correct
So if I can change something about my past, I wouldn\'t join a cheering club and prepare for my future job.
>>So if I can change one thing about my past, I wouldn\'t join a cheering club but rather prepare myself for a good employment .
I think it\'s a dream of senior university students.
>>Correct
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