1212 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for catching up with your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^
Wow! You are really an amazing person! The thought of finding a big bag of cash is exciting, but in the end your feeling of guilt and your conscience will hunt you. So, it\'s still best to do what is right! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I will bring it to the police.
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In Korea, as I know it, even though it seem to ownerless money, we couldn\'t keep it by law.
>>In Korea, as I know it, even though it seems that nobody owns the money, we couldn\'t keep it, according to law.
But if I can keep it secretly, I may consider it a lot.
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As you know, I\'m eager to earn much money now.
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But I will feel guilty because it\'s not the money which was earned by me.
>>But I will feel guilty because it\'s not my hard earned money.
And I always think free money like winning the lottery follows after unlucky.
>>And I always think that money obtained easily like winning the lottery goes with bad luck.
And I think it deserves to be convicted of crime because it\'s like a stealing.
>>And I think a person can be convicted of crime because it\'s like stealing.
Of course, the person who lost the money has responsability but people can make a mistake even if they care it much.
>>Of course, the person who lost the money has the responsibility, but people make mistakes no matter how careful they are.
And if I lost my money, I want someone to bring it back to me.
>>And, if I will lose money, I would want it to be given back to me.
If so, I will be very grateful for that people.
>>If so, I will be very grateful to that person.
In conclsion, I would like to take it to the police because I think it\'s right.
>>In conclusion, I would like to take it to the police because I think it\'s what\'s right.
I think I may consider to keep it but I won\'t do that.
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