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Thanks for doing your homework [이름]! Korean wave means \"Hallyu\" in Korean language.
It is the diffusion of Korean culture. And you are right! Even in the Philippines, it is popular.
And I like it. ^^
~~May~~
Everyone has different ideas.
>> Correct grammar
I live very happy now in my face and made my parents.
>> I live very happily now. I am contented with my face and with what my parents have.
People say that you are handsome guy, and kindly, very positive man.
>> People say that I am handsome, kind, and very positive man.
It is truth!!!!
>> It is true!
Because i think you should live up to his new one of the people. The mind is more important than appearance in a relationship.
>> I think we should live our life. In a relationship, mental is more important than physical appearance.
Plastic surgery is very famous in Korea.
>> Correct grammar
Plastic surgery is very much in Sinsa-dong, Gangnam-gu, Seoul.
>> It is more common in Sinsa-dong, Gangnam-gu, Seoul.
In particular, Chinese people will come here for surgery.
Because of popular Korea culture , it is more popular.
>> In particular, Chinese people go here for surgery because Korean wave is becoming popular nowadays.
There\'s a craze for popular Korean cultures in many Asian countries.
>> Korean wave is now becoming well-known in many Asian countries.
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