[1213]homework

2018-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the questions. Do you think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks? How popular is plastic surgery in your country? => Everyone has different ideas. I live very happy now in my face and made my parents. People say that you are handsome guy, and kindly, very positive man. It is truth!!!! Because i think you should live up to his new one of the people. The mind is more important than appearance in a relationship. Plastic surgery is very famous in korea. Plastic surgery is very much in Sinsa-dong, Gangnam-gu, Seoul. In particular, Chinese people will come here for surgery. Because of popular Korea culture , it is more popular. There's a craze for popular Korean cultures in many Asian countries.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for doing your homework [이름]! Korean wave means \"Hallyu\" in Korean language.

It is the diffusion of Korean culture. And you are right! Even in the Philippines, it is popular.

And I like it. ^^

~~May~~

Everyone has different ideas.

>> Correct grammar

I live very happy now in my face and made my parents. 

>> I live very happily now. I am contented with my face and with what my parents have.
 People say that you are handsome guy, and kindly, very positive man.

>> People say that I am handsome, kind, and very positive man.
 It is truth!!!!

>> It is true!
 Because i think you should live up to his new one of the people. The mind is more important than appearance in a relationship.
>> I think we should live our life. In a relationship, mental is more important than physical appearance.
Plastic surgery is very famous in Korea.

>> Correct grammar

Plastic surgery is very much in Sinsa-dong, Gangnam-gu, Seoul. 

>> It is more common in Sinsa-dong, Gangnam-gu, Seoul. 
In particular, Chinese people will come here for surgery. 

Because of popular Korea culture , it is more popular.

>> In particular, Chinese people go here for surgery because Korean wave is becoming popular nowadays.
There\'s a craze for popular Korean cultures in many Asian countries.

>> Korean wave is now becoming well-known in many Asian countries.

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