1213 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^

You gave awesome thoughts on this one. The best thing to do is to recognize that the person is depressed. No matter how deep or shallow the reasons maybe, for them what they feel is important and that it has to be recognized. I agree with you, listen with intention to understand and not to judge. And ultimately advice the person to seek medical help. ^ ^ Please take note of the words I have replaced with some of the words you have used in your sentences: dropped an exam-failed an exam; job seeking-employment. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah  

I think the reason why some people commit suicide is a depression.

>>I think the reason why some people commit suicide is because of depression. 

They would\'t realize because they were already falling in depressed feeling.

>>They wouldn\'t realize it because they\'re already in a deep state of depression.

I heard if someone gets depression, they will accept situations more sensitively.

>>I heard that if someone is depressed, they take situations more sensitively.

Moreover, bad situation makes them easy to commit suicide.

>>Correct

For instance, if someone who dropped an important exam, she or he must be miserable because they could think they didn\'t do their best.

>>For instance, if someone failed an important exam, she or he must be miserable because they could think that they didn\'t do their best.

Maybe there are many reasons so nations should care their people\'s mentality.

>>Maybe there are many reasons so nations should care about their people\'s mentality.

In Korea, going to a mental hospital is a disadvantage for their job seeking.

>>In Korea, going to a mental hospital is a disadvantage for employment.

I think nations should encourage their people to go to see a mental doctor.

>>I think nations should encourage their people to go and see a mental doctor.

And I would like to say nothing to a person who wants to commit suicide.

>>Correct

Because I could hurt the person unintentionally.

>>Correct

So I would like to listen to them.

>>Correct

I heard it can be very helpful.

>>Correct

Of course, I\'ll suggest them to go to see a doctor.

>>Of course, I\'ll suggest to them to go see a doctor.