[1214]homework
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HOMEWORK:
WRITING TASK
Answer the question.
What influences you to make good choices?
=>I ask my wife and make a good choices. That is good or bad, consult each other and make the right choices.
I don't regret it even if it is a bad choice. Because we can fix it.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for answering this question [이름]! You\'re a good husband. Some husbands out there
are not responsible enough when making choices. My husband also asks me first before making decisions.
That\'s what makes a strong couple. ^^
~~May~~
I ask my wife and make a good choices.
>> I ask my wife and make good choices together.
That is good or bad, consult each other and make the right choices.
>> Whether it is good or bad, we discuss it together and make decisions.
I don\'t regret it even if it is a bad choice. Because we can fix it.
>> I don\'t regret even if we made bad choices because we are still able to solve it.
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