1216 Homework

Hello [이름]! ^^

Thank you for answering the composition topic. ^^ Notice how the usage of compound and complex sentences shorten the whole essay which saves time and words used. ^^

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All good things.

==Teacher Charlie==

If I would be able to change one thing about the world, I would like to change many kinds of languages in this world to only one language. If there were only one language in this world, all of the people who live on this earth can communicate without a language barrier. This means that there are many merits in business and educational field. In the business field, the businesses among more than 2 countries would be progressed more smoothly. In the educational field, many people can be educated by good educational methods from the entire world, in the long run; science would be developed very fast.

>> If I would be able to change one thing about the world, I would change it so that there is only one language used. If there was only one language used in this world, language barriers would be non-existent and this will also benefit a lot of fields such as education and business. In business, international  transactions would progress more smoothly and in education, all-embracing teaching methods can be applied leading to the accelerated development of science.