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2018-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. On the other hand I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last! 2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. However, there are some educational programs on. 3. Firstly , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today. 4. Though the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out. 5. I've always known Caroline as a mean person. Actually, she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice! 6. I got up at 9 o'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Then, I had breakfast and left for work. 7. My brother works in a large office whereas I work on my own at home. 8. Why do you think I don't want to go out tonight. At least, I would be delighted to get out of the house. 9. Ansswer : Moreover 10. Answer : Besides PS. Those questions excessed the number of characters. And I wonder the meaning of "mean person" Have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! A Wonderful Day to you! Thank you for catching up with your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^ You did good with this one, you just got confused with some of your conjunctive adverbs. \"Mean person\" is someone with a nasty attitude or personality. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah



1. I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. On the other hand I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!

>>I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. At least, I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. However, there are some educational programs on.

>>Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. On the other hand, there are some educational programs on.
3. Firstly , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.

>>Correct
4. Though the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.

>>Correct
5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. Actually, she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!

>>I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. However , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. Then, I had breakfast and left for work.

>>Correct
7. My brother works in a large office whereas I work on my own at home.

>>Correct
8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. At least, I would be delighted to get out of the house.

>>Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. Actually , I would be delighted to get out of the house.
9. Ansswer : Moreover

>>Correct
10. Answer : Besides

>>Correct

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