122. Homework
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Whew, Wakanda forever!
I just watched the movie last night, and I think that Wakanda is a modern Utopia :)
How I wish we could have it to heal and protect a lot of beings.
Have a great day, and see you!
ESSAY: If you had the chance to have a 30-minute opportunity to be transported to another part of the globe, where would it be and why?
>>CORRECT!
If I have a chance to have 30 minutes opportunity to visit another part of the globe, I would like to go WAKANDA to steal a Vibranium making a suit like a black panther.
>>If I have a chance to have a 30 minutes opportunity to visit another part of the globe, I would like to go to WAKANDA to steal a Vibranium making a suit like Black Panther\'s.
It’s because first reason it looks cool.
>>The first reason is that it looks cool.
Second if I had worn the suit, I am able to go everywhere since it has a function called cloaking; I can be an invisible man.
>>Second if I wear the suit, I am able to go everywhere since it has a function called cloaking; I can be an invisible man.
Furthermore, third, I may do anything what I want.
>>Third, I may do everything that I want.
And then I saw it could protect physical damages even a gun in the movie.
>> And then I saw it could protect a person from physical damages even from a gun in the movie.
However, I am wondering whether it shall protect super high and low temperature or not.
>> However, I am wondering whether it can protect the wearer from super high and low temperature or not.
So, I want to do experiment if I have a chance to visit there.
>>So, I want to do an experiment if I have a chance to visit there.
Actually, I can\'t select the specific area because I want to travel a lot of places.
>>Actually, I can\'t select a specific area because I want to travel to a lot of places.
Thus, I just wrote an impossible story since I already knew the questions also impossible.
>>Thus, I just wrote an impossible story since I already knew the question was also impossible.
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