1226 homework

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Birth order, according to studies; has a powerful impact upon children\'s emotions, behavior and personality development. By a twist of fate a child is born into a particular spot in the family, and from this position, he will have unique emotional experiences. Each spot in the order has it\'s advantages and challenges. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

Yes. I think it\'s an important element as making person\'s personality especially in Korea.

>>Yes, I think it\'s an important element in molding a person\'s personality especially in Korea.

Because most of parents always educate their children to be polite to their order sisters or brothers.

>>Most parents would teach their children to be polite and respect their older siblings.

And sometimes they prefer their the first child or the youngest child.

>>Sometimes, they favor their oldest or their youngest child.

And the ordest child sacrifices more than the other sisters or brothers.

>>And the oldest child sacrifices more than the other younger siblings.

It depends on their parents character.

>>Correct

I think it effects a lot to their personalities.

>>I think it has a lot of effect on their personalities. 

In my case, my parents wanted me to care about my brother.

>>Correct 

I didn\'t know that it wasn\'t natural thing because my parents thought that I am a girl so I shouls care about everything like doing choirs even though I was young too.

>>I didn\'t know that it wasn\'t a natural thing because my parents perception is that since I\'m a girl I should care about everything like doing choirs even at a young age.

So I grew up like a nice girl.(I\'m not now)

>>Correct

So I think if someone has children, she or he must deal them equally.

>>So I think, if couples would have kids, they must deal with them equally.

And I think they shouldn\'t give a responsibility as their birth order.

>>And I think they shouldn\'t give responsibilities to their children based on their birth orders.

P.S. You have understood the meaning of birth order correctly! ^ ^ By the way, thank you so much for re-enrolling in my class, I appreciate it a lot. If you have any suggestions on how you want to go about the class, please feel free to tell me. Also, I would really appreciate it if you can send a message to our managers and be kind enough to tell something positive about the class and how my class is helping you with your English skills. ^ ^ Thank you so much! ^ ^ But of course, don\'t tell them I told you to do so hahahaha! ^ ^