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A Very Happy New Year to you [이름]! I enjoyed my holiday, hope you did too! ^ ^ Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts on this one too. Guess you\'re right! People are born with empathy but it\'s also a learned trait. According to research; empathy—a concern for others—is present in children from the beginning. These studies suggest that perhaps kindness doesn’t need to be taught anew as much as supported more continuously from an early age. Children’s empathy seems inborn, a gift that is ours as a society to lose depending on how we react to these earliest overtures. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think people are born with empathy but it\'s also a learned trait.
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I saw an article about children\'s empathy.
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Teachers were crying and girls worried about her teacher and cried.
>>A teacher was crying and the girls were worried about their teacher and so they cried too.
But boys were laughing because they thought it\'s a funny situation.
>>But the boys laughed because they thought it was a funny situation.
Empathy is one of the factor of intelligence.
>>Empathy is one of the factors of intelligence.
Boys are not faster than girls in case of empathy.
>>Boys are slower to empathize than girls.
But they could learn that it\'s a serious situation through reactions of surrounding.
>>But they could learn that it\'s a serious situation through the reactions they see around them.
For example, children think dolls are their friends so they treat dolls friendly.
>>For example, children think dolls are their friends so they treat their dolls nicely.
But sometimes they think ants deserve to death because ants are tiny.
>>But sometimes they think ants deserve to die because ants are tiny.
So I believe that education is very important.
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I was surprised because ratio of psychopath is higher than I expected.
>>I was surprised because the number of psychopaths is higher than I expected.
But they learned that it\'s bad to kill someone even though they couldn\'t understand.
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