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1. What did you do last weekend?
-> I played video game, Football Manager. This game is that I manage a football club.But it was a trial version, so I had to stop in middle.
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2. What will you do this weekend?
-> I will go to Incheon war museum with my brother. It made to commemoreate Incheon Landing Operation.
3. Do you have any specific plan?
-> First, we will take a bus to go there. And, we will take some photos to keep in our memory. Then, we will look around museum. Lastly, we will eat some delicious foods at home, after we arrive at home.
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1. What did you do last weekend?
>> Correct.
I played video game, Football Manager. This game is that I manage a football club.
>> I played a video game, Football Manager. This a game where I\'m in charge of a football team.
>> I played a video game, Football Manager. This a game where I\'m in charge of a football team.
But it was a trial version, so I had to stop in middle. :(
>> Correct!
2. What will you do this weekend?
>> Correct.
I will go to Incheon war museum with my brother.
>> Correct!
It made to commemoreate Incheon Landing Operation.
>> It was intended to commemorate the Incheon Landing Operation.
3. Do you have any specific plan?
>> Correct.
First, we will take a bus to go there. And, we will take some photos to keep in our memory.
>> Correct!
>> OR: First, we will take a bus to go there. And, we\'ll also take some pictures to preserve the memories.
>> OR: First, we will take a bus to go there. And, we\'ll also take some pictures to preserve the memories.
Then, we will look around museum.
>> Correct!
Lastly, we will eat some delicious foods at home, after we arrive at home
>> Finally, when we get home, we\'ll eat some delicious food.
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