125. Homework
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강사 첨삭
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ESSAY: Choose one quotation that defines who you are and explain why that quotation describes you so well.
>>CORRECT!
While I was watching education video to study English for taking exam called TOEIC, someone said the quotation below.
>>While I was watching a video lesson to study English for an exam called TOEIC, someone said the quotation below.
“There is no magic. It’s practice, practice, practice.”
>>CORRECT!
Few people who have plenty of talents might not need to practice a lot since they are genius and they do well at drawing, sports, singing or something.
>>CORRECT!
However, I am a person who doesn’t have a lot of abilities and fortunately I already knew who I am and how I need to catch up them.
>>However, I am a person who doesn’t have a lot of abilities, and fortunately I already knew who I am and how I need to catch up with them.
The way how to come over them is that practice a lot until caught up their gift.
>>The way how to chase them is to practice a lot until I attain their gift.
Hence, I practice something such as practice until I feel satisfied.
>>Hence, I practice something until I feel satisfied.
It’s the reason why I write essays every Monday to Friday even if I am exhausted and then practice English every early morning with you while I go to office.
>> It’s the reason why I write essays every Monday to Friday even if I am exhausted and then practice English every early morning with you while I go to the office.
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