125. Homework

2018-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

ESSAY: Choose one quotation that defines who you are and explain why that quotation describes you so well. While I was watching education video to study English for taking exam called TOEIC, someone said the quotation below. “There is no magic. It’s practice, practice, practice.” Few people who have plenty of talents might not need to practice a lot since they are genius and they do well at drawing, sports, singing or something. However, I am a person who doesn’t have a lot of abilities and fortunately I already knew who I am and how I need to catch up them. The way how to come over them is that practice a lot until caught up their gift. Hence, I practice something such as practice until I feel satisfied. It’s the reason why I write essays every Monday to Friday even if I am exhausted and then practice English every early morning with you while I go to office.

강사 첨삭

Thank you very much, Jason^^

I won\'t hear your voice for a few days, so take care!

See you~

ESSAY: Choose one quotation that defines who you are and explain why that quotation describes you so well.
>>CORRECT!
While I was watching education video to study English for taking exam called TOEIC, someone said the quotation below.
>>While I was watching a video lesson to study English for an exam called TOEIC, someone said the quotation below.
“There is no magic. It’s practice, practice, practice.”
>>CORRECT!
Few people who have plenty of talents might not need to practice a lot since they are genius and they do well at drawing, sports, singing or something.
>>CORRECT!
However, I am a person who doesn’t have a lot of abilities and fortunately I already knew who I am and how I need to catch up them.

>>However, I am a person who doesn’t have a lot of abilities, and fortunately I already knew who I am and how I need to catch up with them.

The way how to come over them is that practice a lot until caught up their gift.
>>
The way how to chase them is to practice a lot until I attain their gift.
Hence, I practice something such as practice until I feel satisfied.

>>Hence, I practice something until I feel satisfied.

It’s the reason why I write essays every Monday to Friday even if I am exhausted and then practice English every early morning with you while I go to office.

>> It’s the reason why I write essays every Monday to Friday even if I am exhausted and then practice English every early morning with you while I go to the office.

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