127. Homework

Thank you very much for doing your homework, Jason^^

I think teachers play a vital role in our lives, so we\'d better choose a proper example.

Take care and see you!

ESSAY: Describe a teacher who has influenced you and why. Be sure to include specific details and examples in your response.
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We call teacher [이름]님 in Korea and the basic meaning comes from Chinese words because our cultures are too much related with China.
>>We call teacher [이름]님 in Korea and the basic meaning comes from Chinese words because our cultures are too much related.
When I translate Korean in Chinese, the first word 선(先) means precedent, next word 생(生) means life and the last word 님 means just a word to show their respect to the person who is called by them.

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 So I think when it gathered, it means a person who was boned before me and had many experience better than me.
>> So I think when it is combined, it means a person who was born before me and had more experience better than me.
I have forgotten specific memories with teachers in the school.

>>I have forgotten specific memories with teachers at school.
 That’s why I try to write the meaning of teacher since I want to explain a person who is not an ordinary limited meaning of teacher.
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A person who I am thinking of as my teacher is Christina who I have met in Malaysia for a work.

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She is Canadian and she worked a consultant in previous project.

>>She is Canadian and she worked as a consultant in a previous project.
 When I got problem in the work during the project, she gave me various solutions to improve my poor knowledge even if she was a mechanical special list engineer.

>>When I got a problem at work during the project, she gave me various solutions to improve my poor knowledge even if she was a mechanical specialist engineer.
 And she tried to help making fairness in the unfair situations during a meeting with clients.

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 Furthermore, we still keep in touch in e-mail to share our life stories and give me a wise when I ask her a problem in the life.

>>Furthermore, we still keep in touch in e-mail to share our life stories and give me a wisdom when I ask her a problem about life.

Hence, I think she is a kind of teacher to me.
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Moreover, I think the most import things are an experience not only a number of an age.

>>Moreover, I think the most import things are experience, not only a number of an age.
 Thus, when I meet a person who has good skills or knowledge, I try to learn and copy their good thing and think them a teacher even if younger than me.
>> Thus, when I meet a person who has good skills or knowledge, I try to learn and copy their good thing and think of them as a teacher even if they are younger than me.
Anyways, I just want to finish this writing since I don’t know how to make it complete.

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 Furthermore, I have been undergoing headache; I think the source that gives me pain feeling is my right eye.
>> Furthermore, I have been having a headache; I think the source that gives me the painful feeling is my right eye.
Thus, I want to get to sleep little bit earlier than the other days.
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See you tomorrow.

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