128. Homework

2018-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

I don’t think it is logical to spend a ridiculous amount of money on food and other material things. And I am afraid that I don’t have enough idea for answering this question because there is a word ‘ridiculous’ which works negative meaning is already located in the middle of the sentence. In the engineering, we expect to get output values at least 70 percent when we put an input values in the logical things. However, when I think the word ‘ridiculous’ in my mind then I think it feels like I will get outcomes below 1 percent of values from it. That’s why I don’t have any other opinion for that although I have been thinking about the question more than an hour. I really get confused from it. So, I just want to make this writing finish. See you tomorrow :)

강사 첨삭

Thank you very much, Jason!

I think every person prefers to spend on different things.

However, when we say the word ridiculous, it means that they spend TOO MUCH to the point that they could not save enough money anymore.

I don’t think it is logical to spend a ridiculous amount of money on food and other material things.
>>CORRECT!
And I am afraid that I don’t have enough idea for answering this question because there is a word ‘ridiculous’ which works negative meaning is already located in the middle of the sentence.
>>CORRECT!
In the engineering, we expect to get output values at least 70 percent when we put an input values in the logical things.

>>In Engineering, we expect to an get output value of at least 70 percent when we put an input value in the logical things.
However, when I think the word ‘ridiculous’ in my mind then I think it feels like I will get outcomes below 1 percent of values from it.
>>
However, when I think the word ‘ridiculous’ in my mind then I think it feels like I will get an outcome below 1 percent from it.
That’s why I don’t have any other opinion for that although I have been thinking about the question more than an hour.
>>
That’s why I don’t have any other opinion for that although I have been thinking about the question for more than an hour.
I really get confused from it. So, I just want to make this writing finish.

>>I really get confused from it, so, I just want to finish this writing.
 See you tomorrow :)

>>CORRECT~


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