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학생이 쓴 원문
1. I made a reservation to go sightseeing in Gyeongju this week.
2. Iron or coins that can\'t be found can be found using a metal detector.
3. I voted for the leader of my class to develop leadership.
4. I spend my spare time doing metalwork.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ji[이름]!
Great job on these sentences.
~ Teacher Maxine
I made a reservation to go sightseeing in Gyeongju this week.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I have made a reservation to go sightseeing in Gyeongju this week.
Iron or coins that can\'t be found can be found using a metal detector.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Iron or coins that can\'t be found can be located using a metal detector.
I voted for the leader of my class to develop leadership.
>> I voted for the leader of my class to develop leadership skills.
I spend my spare time doing metalwork.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I spend my spare time doing metalworking.
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