129. Homework

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We have this expression: double-edged sword.

Everything brings a positive as well as negative result.

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ESSAY: As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers.
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Technology improvement has been taking human’s job and I think there are two reasons I can answer for this question.
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First, a lot of owner of companies always consider how to reduce the cost for making their finances better and they already knew the best way to decrease it.

>>First, a lot of company owners always consider how to reduce the cost for making their finances better and they already knew the best way to decrease it.

Regarding that, operators who work continuous things in the factory will be replaced by an automation program.

>>Regarding that, operators who work on continuous things in the factory will be replaced by an automation program.

It takes huge amount money at first for building it but it will be going to cover it after year and year comes.
>>It takes a huge amount money at first for building it, but it will cover it year on year.
Second, kinds of dangerous or dirty jobs which many people want to avoid getting it will be replaced by a robot with advanced technology.

>>Second, dangerous or dirty kinds of jobs which many people want to avoid getting will be replaced by a robot with advanced technology.

 Since education services have been improved, people realized which one is more important things are balanced work and life.

>> Since educational services have been improved, people realized that important things are balanced work and life.

 Thus, people intend to avoid taking disadvantages for that even if company gives quite huge amount money for them.
>>Thus, people intend to avoid taking disadvantages for that even if the company gives quite huge amount money for them.
For example, there were people who used to check level of materials in hoppers to fill it until enough level were substituted by limit and radar sensors; instruments detect level of the materials and send signal to the computer to fill it automatically.

>>For example, there were people who used to check the level of materials in hoppers to fill it until enough level were substituted by limit and radar sensors; instruments detect the level of the materials and send signal to the computer to fill it automatically.

 It brought making their job lost however it also decreased life accidents.
>>It resulted to job loss; however it also decreased life accidents.
Hence, the technologically advanced brings advantage and disadvantage at the same time.

>> Hence, technologically advancement brings advantages and disadvantages at the same time.