12th composition

I think that everyone has to choose one thing from among lots of cases seriously in his life. If that is affecting his life, he has to choose it very carefully and deliberately. Nowadays I had lots of time to think over about it. So I got the stress from it. I have to choose one by this month. If I choose one what I want to do, there is some risky point which I'm not good at doing. And If I choose the other one which I'm good at doing it. There is some stabilization of working and life. But I cant enjoy to do it. That's my worry.

Hello [이름]! Thank you for sending your composition. Here are your corrections, please check them out. Take care and good night!^^ I think that everyone has to choose one thing from among lots of cases seriously in his life. >>I think that everyone has to choose one among so many cases in life seriously.If that is affecting his life, he has to choose it very carefully and deliberately. >>CORRECT!Nowadays I had lots of time to think over about it. >>Nowadays, I have a lot of time to think it over. So I got the stress from it. >>So I got stressed from it.I have to choose one by this month. >>CORRECT! If I choose one what I want to do, there is some risky point which I'm not good at doing. >>If I choose what I want to do, there are some risky points which I'm not good at dealing.And If I choose the other one which I'm good at doing it.There is some stabilization of working and life. >>If I choose the other one which I know I'm good at dealing with, there will be stabilization with my work and life. But I cant enjoy to do it. >>But I know I won't enjoy it.That's my worry. >>That's what I'm worried about. >>That's my dilemma. >>That's my problem.