12th July

These days it's rainning something like being the hole in the sky. I love to watch the rainning through the window as having a cup of coffee. But, I couldn’t enjoy it because there are lots of damage from the heavy rain in korea. I have not ever experienced the damage from the rain. If I were suffered by the rain, it is going to be harder than I thought. Lately we can see the strange climatic change easily. Most of experts tell us, "It's influenced by the environmental pollution" But, I doubt the truth. I just think it the natural change of the earth.

Hello! You did a good job in writing this composition. You were able to expres how you feel about the  weather. We are experiencing the same thing here in my country, so I understand. I noted a few mistakes. Check them out! T. Faye These days it's rainning something like being the hole in the sky. >>These days it has been raining as if there is a hole in the sky.I love to watch the rainning through the window as having a cup of coffee. >>I love to watch the rain through the window while having a cup of coffee.But, I couldn’t enjoy it because there are lots of damage from the heavy rain in korea. >> But, I couldn뭪 enjoy it because there are lots of damage caused by the heavy rain in korea.I have not ever experienced the damage from the rain. >> I have never experienced the damage from the rain. If I were suffered by the rain, it is going to be harder than I thought. >> If I suffer because of the rain, it is going to be harder than I think.Lately we can see the strange climatic change easily. >>Correct OR>> Lately we have been seeing the strange climatic change easily. Most of experts tell us, "It's influenced by the environmental pollution" >> Most of experts tell us, "It's influenced by the environmental pollution". But, I doubt the truth. >>Correct OR>>But I doubt it. I just think it the natural change of the earth. >> I just think it  is the natural changes of the earth.