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What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of shopping on line? Shopping on line is convenient to buy something and the price is cheaper than off line. Even there is an extra fee for delivery when the amount of price doesn't over a certain standard, the stuff of on line always costs cheaper than that of off line. And also the stuff is delivered so we don't have to go out to get it. However, there are some disadvantages of shopping on line. First, We can't check and see the stuff thoughly so we can't sure its quality. Second, it is very tiresome to change the size and color of the products or to refund it. For these reasons, we have to consider more seriously when ordering the product by the on line so that we can get its advantages.

  Hello, thank you for doing your homework. You have very good points, you were able to express what your thoughts although I have some corrections towards your sentences. Please review and if you have questions about it, we can discuss it during class. Keep warm! =-----T. Kristel-----     Shopping on line is convenient to buy something and the price is cheaper than off line. >>>Shopping online is more convenient and cheaper than shopping offline. Even there is an extra fee for delivery when the amount of price doesn\'t over a certain standard, the stuff of on line always costs cheaper than that of off line.>>>Even with the extra fee for delivery if the amount of purchase doesn\'t exceed a certain standard, the stuff online are always cheaper than that of offline stuff. And also the stuff is delivered so we don\'t have to go out to get it.>>>CORRECT However, there are some disadvantages of shopping on line. >>>CORRECT First, We can\'t check and see the stuff thoughly so we can\'t sure its quality.>>>First, We can\'t check and see the stuff thoroughly so we can\'t be assured of it\'s quality. Second, it is very tiresome to change the size and color of the products or to refund it. >>>Second, it is very tiresome to have the size and color of the products changed or to get it refunded. For these reasons, we have to consider more seriously when ordering the product by the on line so that we can get its advantages. >>>For these reasons, we have to give serious consideration when ordering products online so that we can get full advantage for shopping online.