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2018-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! This is wonderful holidays! Happy Lunar New Year's Day!! I have taken a rest in my home and eaten much food. Also I went to Gapyeong with my friends last Wednesday. As one of them will marry next month, we had "brider shower" to congraturate her. We ate some delicious food like Korean barbecue, shrimps, cakes and beer. I have got weight! LOL Followings is my homeworks. Thanks and have a nice day! a. I play soccer ___badly___. well / badly / superbly b. I do homework __carefully___. badly / quickly / carefully c. I run ___slowl__. quickly / slowly / terribly d. I speak English __loudly___. well / loudly / quietly e. I play computer games ___badly___. badly / superbly / well f. I ride a bike __slowly___. carefully / fast / slowly

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! We haven\'t talked for almost 6 days. How are you now?

I guess you\'re really good and you enjoyed your vacation, because you gained weight. Haha! ^^

Congratulations to your friend! I missed you. Hope to talk to you tomorrow.

By the way, I corrected your sentences. Check it out. Take care! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Hi!
This is wonderful holidays!

>> It\'s a wonderful holiday!
Happy Lunar New Year\'s Day!!

>> CORRECT
I have taken a rest in my home and eaten much food.

>> I have taken a rest at home and eaten a lot of food.
Also I went to Gapyeong with my friends last Wednesday.

>> Also, I went to Gapyeong with my friends last Wednesday.

OR >> I also went to Gapyeong with my friends last Wednesday.
As one of them will marry next month, we had \"brider shower\" to congraturate her.

>> One of them will be getting married next month. She had a bridal shower and we congratulated her.
We ate some delicious food like Korean barbecue, shrimps, cakes and beer.

>> We ate some delicious foods like Korean barbecue, shrimps, cakes and beer. 
I have got weight! LOL

>> I gained weight!
Followings is my homeworks.

>> Below is my homework.
Thanks and have a nice day!
>> CORRECT
a. I play soccer ___badly___. well / badly / superbly
b. I do homework __carefully___. badly / quickly / carefully
c. I run ___slowly__. quickly / slowly / terribly
d. I speak English __loudly___. well / loudly / quietly
e. I play computer games ___badly___. badly / superbly / well
f. I ride a bike __slowly___. carefully / fast / slowly

>> CORRECT!

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