13/2/2018_homework
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Hi [이름]! We haven\'t talked for almost 6 days. How are you now?
I guess you\'re really good and you enjoyed your vacation, because you gained weight. Haha! ^^
Congratulations to your friend! I missed you. Hope to talk to you tomorrow.
By the way, I corrected your sentences. Check it out. Take care! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
Hi!
This is wonderful holidays!
>> It\'s a wonderful holiday!
Happy Lunar New Year\'s Day!!
>> CORRECT
I have taken a rest in my home and eaten much food.
>> I have taken a rest at home and eaten a lot of food.
Also I went to Gapyeong with my friends last Wednesday.
>> Also, I went to Gapyeong with my friends last Wednesday.
OR >> I also went to Gapyeong with my friends last Wednesday.
As one of them will marry next month, we had \"brider shower\" to congraturate her.
>> One of them will be getting married next month. She had a bridal shower and we congratulated her.
We ate some delicious food like Korean barbecue, shrimps, cakes and beer.
>> We ate some delicious foods like Korean barbecue, shrimps, cakes and beer.
I have got weight! LOL
>> I gained weight!
Followings is my homeworks.
>> Below is my homework.
Thanks and have a nice day!
>> CORRECT
a. I play soccer ___badly___. well / badly / superbly
b. I do homework __carefully___. badly / quickly / carefully
c. I run ___slowly__. quickly / slowly / terribly
d. I speak English __loudly___. well / loudly / quietly
e. I play computer games ___badly___. badly / superbly / well
f. I ride a bike __slowly___. carefully / fast / slowly
>> CORRECT!
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