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I can't meet and see my boss.
He is always busy and he stays at head office.
So, let me tell you about my team leader.
My team leader is a tall and handsome man.
His first impression is very bad to me.
While my co-workers work, he doesn't work and play the games on the internet.
That is why.
However, when I have some problems with my co-workers, he always has a solution.
He tries our work alone and he always studies about our team's work.
I am surprise about that.
I like him these days.
I will try my work like him.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] -
I want to thank you for always taking time in sending your compositions.
You have been busy at work and being a mother but you never fail to do your homeworks with me.
I am also proud since I can see improvement on your sentences already.
Keep it up!^^
I will talk to you again tomorrow.
Have a great evening!
= Teacher Bella =
I can\'t meet and see my boss.>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I haven\'t met my boss yet.
He is always busy and he stays at the head office.
>> CORRECT!
So, let me tell you about my team leader.
>> Let me tell you about my team leader instead.
My team leader is a tall and handsome man.
>> CORRECT!
His first impression is very bad to me.
>> OR: I had a bad impression on him.
While my co-workers work, he doesn\'t work and play the games on the internet. That is why.>> He makes himself busy playing games on the internet even during working hours.
However, when I have some problems with my co-workers, he always has a solution.
>> CORRECT!
He tries our work alone and he always studies about our team\'s work.
>> He tries our work and check on our team\'s output.
I am surprised about that.
>> CORRECT!
I like him these days.
>> CORRECT!
I will try my work like him.
>> I will try to work like him.
>> OR: I will try to be like him.
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