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2015-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

학생이 쓴 원문

I can't meet and see my boss. He is always busy and he stays at head office. So, let me tell you about my team leader. My team leader is a tall and handsome man. His first impression is very bad to me. While my co-workers work, he doesn't work and play the games on the internet. That is why. However, when I have some problems with my co-workers, he always has a solution. He tries our work alone and he always studies about our team's work. I am surprise about that. I like him these days. I will try my work like him.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] -   I want to thank you for always taking time in sending your compositions. You have been busy at work and being a mother but you never fail to do your homeworks with me. I am also proud since I can see improvement on your sentences already. Keep it up!^^ I will talk to you again tomorrow. Have a great evening!   = Teacher Bella =     I can\'t meet and see my boss.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I haven\'t met my boss yet.   He is always busy and he stays at the head office. >> CORRECT! So, let me tell you about my team leader. >> Let me tell you about my team leader instead. My team leader is a tall and handsome man. >> CORRECT! His first impression is very bad to me. >> OR: I had a bad impression on him. While my co-workers work, he doesn\'t work and play the games on the internet. That is why.>> He makes himself busy playing games on the internet even during working hours. However, when I have some problems with my co-workers, he always has a solution. >> CORRECT! He tries our work alone and he always studies about our team\'s work. >> He tries our work and check on our team\'s output.   I am surprised about that. >> CORRECT! I like him these days. >> CORRECT! I will try my work like him. >> I will try to work like him. >> OR: I will try to be like him.

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