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In my opinion, chatting online is very convenience.
I can't often call to my friends because they and I are very busy.
So when I have some free time, I chat online with my friends.
Also I can chat online with many of my friends together.
However we have to be careful about personal information.
Also while we chat on line with your friends, we can get misunderstood because of writing.
I often use messenger called kakaotalk in my office because my office doesn't want to use catting.
Many Korean office prevent to chat in their office.
So my employees only have to work in their office.
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It\'s great that you had time to write your answer. Some reminders:
The following sentences are examples of the S-V-Adj pattern.
He is fine. Basic sentence with “be” verbHe seems happy. Basic sentence with another linking verbJordan is tall, dark and handsome. Series of adjectivesHe appears very comfortable. Adverb or intensifier addedGeorge became sick last night. Different tense and linking verb
Teacher Venus^^
In my opinion, chatting online is very convenience.
>>>In my opinion, chatting online is very convenient.
I can\'t often call to my friends because they and I are very busy.
>>>I can\'t often call my friends because we are too busy to meet each other.
So when I have some free time, I chat online with my friends.
>>>CORRECT
Also I can chat online with many of my friends together.
>>>CORRECT
However we have to be careful about personal information.>>>However we have to be careful about giving our personal information.
Also while we chat on line with your friends, we can get misunderstood because of writing.>>>Also while we chat online with our friends, we can be misunderstood because of typographical errors.
I often use messenger called kakaotalk in my office because my office doesn\'t want to use catting.>>>I often use a type of Instant Messaging (IM) called kakaotalk in my office because my manager doesn\'t want us to use chatting.
Many Korean office prevent to chat in their office.>>>Many Korean managers prevent their employees from chatting in their office.
So my employees only have to work in their office.
>>>So many employees only have to work in their office.
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