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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! I am very happy to know that you like your classroom. It helps you study well in school. Hmm.. Please take note of the errors on your sentence and keep on practicing! Nice work! I\'ll see you in our class [이름]!
1. What do you like about your classroom?
My classroom is very kind and brighten!
>>> My classroom has a very kind and bright atmosphere!
I like my classrom everything
>>> I like everything in my classroom.
3. What are five things you would like to change in your classroom?
Just I want nothing changes my classroom!
>>>I just don\'t want to change anything in my classroom!
7times a day.
>>> It will be for 7 hours a day.
5. Is your classroom a nice place to study? Why or Why not?
My classroom is a nice place to study! Don\'t have reason^^!!
>>> My classroom is a nice place to study! I don\'t have any reason why.
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