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I alrealy answered this question before.
Earning money is very important in our lives.
Also nowadays many young people can't have their job.
So they can earn money and save money for their future.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름],
Had you answered this questions already? I\'m sorry. Thank you for answering the question anyway. You are the best, Ms. [이름]! See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I alrealy answered this question before.
>> I already answered this question before.
Earning money is very important in our lives.
>> correct!
Also nowadays many young people can\'t have their job.
>> Nowadays, many young people can\'t find a job.
So they can earn money and save money for their future.
>> So they can\'t earn enough and save for their future.
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