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학생이 쓴 원문
While we play sport, we can learn cooperative spirit.
When we win the sport, we can feel a sense of accomplishment.
We also can have sense of fair play.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
As you know, we don\'t only learn sportmanship through sports but we can maintain a healthy body if we do any sports regualrly. So let\'s try doing easy ones like Badminton or Table Tennis. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
While we play sport, we can learn cooperative spirit.
>> correct!
OR>> When we do sports, we learn sportsmanship.When we win the sport, we can feel a sense of accomplishment.
>> When we win in sports, we can feel a sense of accomplishment.We also can have sense of fair play.
>> correct!
OR>> We also win fair play.
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