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2017-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

If it is possible, I want to trade places with very famous actress' house. Because it seems very fantastic. I want to live a big fantastic house with a big beautiful garden. Many famous actress have it in my country. That is the reason why I want to trade places.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!
You are right. When celebrities show their houses on TV, their houses look fantastic and fancy that I sometimes want to live their maybe for a short time. I could never have a house like that so I\'ll have to do it in my dreams, I guess.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
If it is possible, I want to trade places with very famous actress\'s house.
>> correct!
Because it seems very fantastic.
>> correct!
I want to live a big fantastic house with a big beautiful garden.
>> I want to live in a big fantastic house with a big beautiful garden.
Many famous actress have it in my country.
>> Many famous actresses have it in my country.
That is the reason why I want to trade places.
>> That is the reason why I want to trade places with one of them.

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