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2017-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Eating home-cooked meals is to save money and to keep our health. I know it is very important in our life. However, it is not easy nowadays. Many adults are very busy like you mention. So they want to save time with their family like me. And they want to have free time in save time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!

Everybody knows that home-cooked meals are better but it seems that people are just too busy or too lazy to cook.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Eating home-cooked meals is to save money and to keep our health.

>> Eating home-cooked meals save money and keep us healthy.

I know it is very important in our life.

>> correct!
However, it is not easy nowadays.

>> correct!
Many adults are very busy like you mentioned.

>> correct!
So they want to save time with their family like me.

>> So they want to save time and spend it with their family like me.
And they want to have free time in save time.

>> And so they want to have free time and save time.

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