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강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Everybody knows that home-cooked meals are better but it seems that people are just too busy or too lazy to cook.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Eating home-cooked meals is to save money and to keep our health.
>> Eating home-cooked meals save money and keep us healthy.
I know it is very important in our life.
>> correct!
However, it is not easy nowadays.
>> correct!
Many adults are very busy like you mentioned.
>> correct!
So they want to save time with their family like me.
>> So they want to save time and spend it with their family like me.
And they want to have free time in save time.
>> And so they want to have free time and save time.
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