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2017-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

학생이 쓴 원문

I made some sentences with adjectives. I like all seasons but my favorite season is spring. There are a lot of beautiful things in the spring. For examples red roses blossom, birds with beautiful voice and many green trees. I miss spring despite fall season now which has many beautiful colors trees.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for sending your sample sentences!

~~ Teacher Kathy

I made some sentences with adjectives.

>> I constructed some sentences using adjectives.
I like all seasons but my favorite season is spring.

>> I like all seasons, but my favorite season is spring.

There are a lot of beautiful things in the spring.

>> Correct!

>> There are a lot of beautiful things you can see during spring time.
For examples red roses blossom, birds with beautiful voice and many green trees.

Red roses bloom, birds sing and there are many green trees.

I miss spring despite fall season now which has many beautiful colors trees.

>> I miss spring season. Despite of the fact that it\'s now fall season, there are still many beautiful and colorful trees.

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