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2017-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

학생이 쓴 원문

I attend Hallowen events in lunch time. But it is very diffcult to find you because of the mask. You are No4... right? I believe it... please... Have a good lunch time. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for answering your homework.

~~ Teacher Kathy

I attend Hallowen events in lunch time.

>> I checked the website this lunch time.
But it is very diffcult to find you because of the mask.

>> But it was very difficult to find which one you were.
You are No4... right?

>> You are number 4, right?
I believe it... please...

>> I do believe you are number 4.

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