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학생이 쓴 원문
1. My mother, father and sister are coming to dinner tonight.
2. I like learning English but it makes me tired.
3. My sister was taller than me when we were young but now I am the tallest it is fun.
4. I love school, I love learning because my teacher is nice.
5. I don’t want much for Christmas but just some chocolates and a little toy car.
6. Blue is my favorite color; it is the color of the sky, the sea and it reminds me of my favorite insect which is the butterfly.
7. When I get older, I want to have a big family because I like big families.
8. We usually leave at 11:00 but today is different, we are leaving at 10:30.
9. I like Tuesdays and Wednesdays, I like Fridays because the weekend starts on Friday.
10. We should get moving because there’s no time to waste.
This homework is difficult for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
1. My mother, father and sister are coming to dinner tonight.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> My parents and my sister are coming to dinner tonight.
2. I like learning English but it makes me tired.>> Correct!
3. My sister was taller than me when we were young but now I am the tallest it is fun.
>> My sister was taller than me when we were young. Now I am the tallest, which is fun.
4. I love school, I love learning because my teacher is nice.>> I love school and learning. I have a nice teacher.
5. I don’t want much for Christmas but just some chocolates and a little toy car.>> I don’t want much for Christmas just some chocolates and a little toy car.
6. Blue is my favorite color; it is the color of the sky, the sea and it reminds me of my favorite insect which is the butterfly.
>> Blue is my favorite color. It is the color of the sky and the sea. Also, it reminds me of my favorite insect which is the butterfly.
7. When I get older, I want to have a big family because I like big families.
>> When I get older I want to have a big family; I like big families.
8. We usually leave at 11:00 but today is different, we are leaving at 10:30.
8. We usually leave at 11:00 but today is different, we are leaving at 10:30.
>> We usually leave at 11:00 but today is different; we are leaving at 10:30.
9. I like Tuesdays and Wednesdays, I like Fridays because the weekend starts on Friday.
>> I like Tuesdays and Wednesdays. I also like Fridays, because the weekend starts on Friday.
10. We should get moving because there’s no time to waste.
>> We should get moving. There’s no time to waste.
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