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I think it is not important for your future like background, graduate etc.
When we try very hard, we can get a lot of things.
Our efforts will never betray us.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름],
You are right. Many successful people around the world started from humble beginnings but succeeded in the end due to their determination and a lot of hard work.
Take care!(\",)
~T. lynn
I think it is not important for your future like background, graduate etc.
>> I think it is not important if you came from a rich family or if you have a good education.
OR>> Family background or education does not matter.
When we try very hard, we can get a lot of things.
>> correct!
OR>> If you give your best and work hard, you can be successful too.
Our efforts will never betray us.
>> correct!
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