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학생이 쓴 원문
These days, everytings is very expensive in Korea.
Most Korean wanted to have their houses.
It was most Korean's dream to save money.
But nawadays we can't have many things despite saving money.
So in my opinion, living in the present is less challenging than living in the past.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름],
It\'s not only true in your country, it is the same in our country.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
These days, everything is very expensive in Korea.
>> correct!
Most Korean wanted to have their houses.
>> Most Koreans to have their own houses.
It was most Korean\'s dream to save money.
>> Most of us dream of saving money.
But nowadays we can\'t have many things despite saving money.
>> correct!
So in my opinion, living in the present is less challenging than living in the past.
>> correct!
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