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I enjoy working with others.
While I work with my co-workers, we share our skills.
It is advantages by working with other people.
I always check the e_mails.
And than I check work to do and share it with my team menbers.
We always help together.
But sometime, I get angry and stressed but I still like my job.
강사 첨삭
I enjoy working with others.
>> Correct
While I work with my co-workers, we share our skills.
>> Correct
or
>> We share skills when I work with colleagues.
It is advantages by working with other people.
>> It is an advantage to work with others.
I always check the e_mails. And than I check work to do and share it with my team menbers.
>> I always emails, check work-to-do list and then share it with the team members.
We always help together.
>> We always help each other.
But sometime, I get angry and stressed but I still like my job.
>> Correct
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