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In Korea, most girls students study very harder than most boys in high school.
>>In Korea, most girl students study harder than most boys in high school.
So they can get high grade more than boys.
>> So, they get higher grades than boys.
So most boys parents want to be different classes for boys or want to add points for boys.
>> So, most of the boy\'s parents want a different/separate classes for boys or they want to add more points for boys.
The high school of my daughter give to add points for boys.
>> The high school where my daughter will attend, add points for boys.
So I am very upset because my daughter is girl.
>> Correct
or
>>> So, I\'m disappointed with it because my daughter is a girl.
So I disagree.
>> Correct
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