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2015-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Does your emotional situation affect the quality of your life? Give some examples and explain in 5-8 sentences. Absoultely. I'm super sensitive type. Once I get depressed, it feels like being sucked into deep swamp i can't never get out of. It doesn't happen so often, fortunately. But It seriiously effects the quality of my life. It makes me become lethargic and keep crying. Ultimately, the root cause still left unresolved.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday!

Thank you once again for sending in your homework.

You always make me proud of you my dear and I do hope you will keep up the good work..;)

Take care always and have a great day ahead!^^

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Does your emotional situation affect the quality of your life? Give some examples and explain in 5-8 sentences.
Absoultely.

>>correct

Observe the proper spelling of the word ABSOLUTELY.

I\'m super sensitive type.

>>correct

OR: I am a super sensitive type of person.

Once I get depressed, it feels like being sucked into deep swamp i can\'t never get out of.

>>Once I get depressed, it feels like I am being sucked into a deep swamp i can\'t never get out of.

It doesn\'t happen so often, fortunately.

>>correct

But It seriiously effects the quality of my life.

>>correct

Observe the proper spelling of the word SERIOUSLY.

It makes me become lethargic and keep crying.

>>correct

Ultimately, the root cause still left unresolved.

>>correct

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