13/may
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Happy Wednesday!
Thank you once again for sending in your homework.
You always make me proud of you my dear and I do hope you will keep up the good work..;)
Take care always and have a great day ahead!^^
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Does your emotional situation affect the quality of your life? Give some examples and explain in 5-8 sentences.
Absoultely.
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Observe the proper spelling of the word ABSOLUTELY.
I\'m super sensitive type.
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OR: I am a super sensitive type of person.
Once I get depressed, it feels like being sucked into deep swamp i can\'t never get out of.
>>Once I get depressed, it feels like I am being sucked into a deep swamp i can\'t never get out of.
It doesn\'t happen so often, fortunately.
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But It seriiously effects the quality of my life.
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Observe the proper spelling of the word SERIOUSLY.
It makes me become lethargic and keep crying.
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Ultimately, the root cause still left unresolved.
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