130. Homework

Children should definitely be given their own time to enjoy their childhood.^^

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ESSAY: Many children are forced to stay at school and study subjects that will be of little value to them in the future. These children may disrupt the education of the majority and should be allowed to leave school early to find themselves a job. What are your views?
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Children who are forced by their parents for studying subjects in the school might disturb their classmates.

>>Children who are forced by their parents to study subjects at school might disturb their classmates.

Moreover, these kinds of people make some bad things, for example they drink alcohol even though they are not allowed it under rule or they make violence to their classmates.
>>Moreover, these kinds of people make some bad things, for example, they drink alcohol even though they are not allowed, or they make violence to their classmates.
Actually, in my opinion, they should better to find themselves a job early instead of making some noise in the class for their and their classmate’s future since I am a person who has utilitarianism view; it means I prefer to the greatest happiness more than less persons\' victim.
>>Actually, in my opinion, they should better to find themselves a job early instead of making some noise in the class for their and their classmate’s future since I am a person who has a utilitarianism view; it means I prefer to the greatest happiness more than a few victims.
Nevertheless, I am a person who likes to give a chance others equally.

>>Nevertheless, I am a person who likes to give others  a chance equally.

Moreover, I already knew how important the basic education which studies until high school is.
>>Moreover, I already knew how important basic education which we study until high school is.
Hence, I think school should hire more teachers to handle troublesome in the class making them to have better life at future.

>>Hence, I think school should hire more teachers to handle troublesome students in the class making them have a better life in the future.

I think it is kind of investment and it is how to make balance based on my opinion between utilitarianism and equalize.

>>I think it is a kind of an investment and it is how to make balance based on my opinion between utilitarianism and equalize.