13nov2024-homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Write about a problem you faced in the past. How did you solve it, and what did you learn from the experience?
Answer : I think I\'m real diffurent person when I fight with my husband. There were times when I really wanted to hit him. But one day, my daughter saw us fight and imitated us, and I was really surprised..
After that, when I think I\'m going to get into trouble with my husband, i take a break or calm down and talk to each other about it.
There\'s saying that \'Children is a mirror of parent\' So I\'m always determined not to say, bad things as much as Possible.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! What the children see and hear, especially from people they trust, is extremely critical to their development. I also have experienced how true that was firsthand with my child. From then on, I realized that I have to watch what I say and do.
-T. Sonny
I think I\'m real diffurent person when I fight with my husband.
>>I think I\'m a completely different person when I fight with my husband.
There were times when I really wanted to hit him.
>>There were times when I had the urge to be violent.
But one day, my daughter saw us fight and imitated us, and I was really surprised..
>>But one day, my daughter saw us fight and imitated us; I was shocked.
After that, when I think I\'m going to get into trouble with my husband, i take a break or calm down and talk to each other about it.
>>After that, when I feel that I\'m going to get into trouble with my husband, I take a break or calm down and talk it out.
There\'s saying that \'Children is a mirror of parent\' So I\'m always determined not to say, bad things as much as Possible.
>>But one day, my daughter saw us fight and imitated us; I was shocked.
After that, when I think I\'m going to get into trouble with my husband, i take a break or calm down and talk to each other about it.
>>After that, when I feel that I\'m going to get into trouble with my husband, I take a break or calm down and talk it out.
There\'s saying that \'Children is a mirror of parent\' So I\'m always determined not to say, bad things as much as Possible.
>>There\'s a saying that \'Children are a mirror of parents\' which made me determined not to say bad things as much as possible at all times.
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