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2011-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I like the food which is seasoned too highly. I know these kinds of food is not good healthy to me. But, I cant stand eating them. I especially love to eat a hot taste. I want it stronger taste more and more. When I eat it, I feel a releasing stress. I try to change my taste from a spicy food to a plain food. It's not easy to change. I think that my taste is already fixed to the spicy and hot food. As I get the stress more, I want it more and more. So I have to get rid of a stress or change my taste.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank뭩 for sharing me your favorite food. Enjoy eating! I like the food which is seasoned too highly. >>I like highly seasoned foods. I know these kinds of food is not good healthy to me. >>I know that these kinds of food are not good for my health.But, I cant stand eating them. I especially love to eat a hot taste. >>But I can뭪 avoid eating these foods. Most especially, I love eating spicy foods. I want it stronger taste more and more. >>I want it more spicy than the usual.When I eat it, I feel a releasing stress. >> When I eat spicy foods, I feel like I뭢 stress free. I try to change my taste from a spicy food to a plain food. >>I tried to shift from spicy food to plain food.It's not easy to change. >>but it isn뭪 easy to change. I think that my taste is already fixed to the spicy and hot food. >>I think I뭢 use to hot and spicy food.As I get the stress more, I want it more and more. >>When I have so much stress, I want my food to be more spicy.So I have to get rid of a stress or change my taste. >>So I have to get rid of stress to change my eating habits.

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