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I like the food which is seasoned too highly. I know these kinds of food is not good healthy to me.
But, I cant stand eating them. I especially love to eat a hot taste. I want it stronger taste more and more.
When I eat it, I feel a releasing stress. I try to change my taste from a spicy food to a plain food.
It's not easy to change. I think that my taste is already fixed to the spicy and hot food.
As I get the stress more, I want it more and more.
So I have to get rid of a stress or change my taste.
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Hi [이름]!
Thank뭩 for sharing me your favorite food. Enjoy eating!
I like the food which is seasoned too highly.
>>I like highly seasoned foods. I know these kinds of food is not good healthy to me.
>>I know that these kinds of food are not good for my health.But, I cant stand eating them. I especially love to eat a hot taste.
>>But I can뭪 avoid eating these foods. Most especially, I love eating spicy foods.
I want it stronger taste more and more.
>>I want it more spicy than the usual.When I eat it, I feel a releasing stress.
>> When I eat spicy foods, I feel like I뭢 stress free.
I try to change my taste from a spicy food to a plain food.
>>I tried to shift from spicy food to plain food.It's not easy to change.
>>but it isn뭪 easy to change. I think that my taste is already fixed to the spicy and hot food. >>I think I뭢 use to hot and spicy food.As I get the stress more, I want it more and more.
>>When I have so much stress, I want my food to be more spicy.So I have to get rid of a stress or change my taste.
>>So I have to get rid of stress to change my eating habits.
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