13th March's homework

Thank you for doing your homework SPRING!

I made the necessary corrections and I hope you can go over them.

See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

QUOTE FOR THE DAY:
“Do not watch the clock. Do what it does. Keep going.\"~Sam Levenson

HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
Tell me about a place you remember from your childhood, and describe what it meant to you then and why.

I grew up in Busan when I was childhood.

>>> I grew up in Busan.

There were some beutiful beaches in Busan.

>>> There were some beautiful beaches there.

Every night I used to go there with my family and friends during the bacangs season by walkin.

>>> Every night, I used to go there with my family and friends on foot during the bacangs season.

Becuase among them one beach was next to my home. It was so close to my home.

>>> it\'s very easy to do that because there was a beach resort which was very close to my home.

Also, It has many cafeteria and local stores nearby.

>>> Also, there were many cafeterias and local stores nearby.

For these reasons that beach I went is the place that I remeber.
>>> For these reasons that beach is the place I remember the most.
I\'m looking forward your advice.

>>> That\'s all I can share and I\'m looking forward to your feedback.