14.04.2015

ESSAY: In three to five sentences describe your city/country. I describe paris when i live. - Almost structure is historic and really beautiful so there is always many tourists - We can find easily on the road a people who have different ethnicity. - There is many cruises ships on river seine. - The subway station is really dirty and dangerous

Hello [이름]!!! You really have a knack of finishing two homework at the same time. Don\'t worry I am not mad about it but I am in awe that you can manage to insert making these homeworks despite your hectic schedule. I just want to remind you to capitalize proper nouns and use punctuation marks on your sentences. If you have time to spare, look into the corrections I have placed below. See you soon!!! Teacher Roxy xoxoxo I describe paris when i live.>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: I will be describing Paris since it is where I live now.- Almost structure is historic and really beautiful so there is always many tourists >> Most of the structures are historical and are really beautiful so there is a lot of tourists. OR >> Lots of tourists visit Paris because  most of the structures are historical and are really beautiful - We can find easily on the road a people who have different ethnicity. >> We can easily spot people who have different ethnicities on the road. OR >> It is full of people who have different ethnicities. - There is many cruises ships on river seine. >> There are many cruise ships on the river Seine. OR >> The river Seine is full of cruise ships. - The subway station is really dirty and dangerous >> The subway station is really dirty and dangerous.