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Last month I went to Gangwon-do with my family. There are a lot of fresh air and mountain. My husband had to drive his car for 3 hours. He was very tired but he looked happy. We stayed in Daemyung Resort which was very expensive but we could go there without charge. We visited water park that called Ocean World. It was very big water park and very famous park in Korea. And than my family had a lot of meat called Samgyeopsal for dinner in the evening. My family looked happy and they wanted visit there again. However I don't like to visit ther again because my skin is very sensitive so sometimes my skin make some trouble.

Hello [이름]!   You are doing much better today. Some reminders: 1. Don\'t forget your articles (a, an, the). 2. Check your spelling (then, there).   Teacher Venus^^   Last month I went to Gangwon-do with my family. >>>CORRECT There are a lot of fresh air and mountain. >>>There are a lot of fresh air and mountains. My husband had to drive his car for 3 hours. >>>CORRECT He was very tired but he looked happy. >>>CORRECT We stayed in Daemyung Resort which was very expensive but we could go there without charge. >>>CORRECT We visited water park that called Ocean World. >>>We visited a water park that is called Ocean World. It was very big water park and very famous park in Korea. >>>It is a very big water park and very famous park in Korea. And than my family had a lot of meat called Samgyeopsal for dinner in the evening.>>>And then my family had a lot of meat called Samgyeopsal for dinner in the evening.   My family looked happy and they wanted visit there again.>>>My family looked happy and they wanted to visit there again.   However I don\'t like to visit ther again because my skin is very sensitive so sometimes my skin make some trouble. >>>However I don\'t like to visit there again because my skin is very sensitive so sometimes my skin has some trouble.