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What's your most valued possession?
- My friends.
Can you remember the last gift you were given? Did you like it? Why or Why not?
- Hmm...... I remember the last gift is clothes. I like it because i like cloth..
What's the most expensive thing you've ever bought?
- clothes..
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I am not surprised that you like clothes because I can observe how you dress. ^^ Anyway, you answered directly yet you need to answer in complete sentence, okay? ^^ See you later!
What\'s your most valued possession?- My friends.>>> My most valued possession would be my friends.
Can you remember the last gift you were given? Did you like it? Why or Why not?- Hmm...... I remember the last gift is clothes. I like it because i like cloth..>>> The last gift that I have as far as I remember was clothes. And I like it very much because I like clothes.
What\'s the most expensive thing you\'ve ever bought?- clothes..
>>> The most expensive thing I\'ve ever bought would be clothes.
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